It looks good. In retrospect, you could have gotten the right angle adapters on the back of the softener instead of the straight. That would have given you a more gentle curve on the stainless lines. But what you have will work well.I installed the water softener earlier today. It was the first time I've sweated copper in 13 years. First joints I sweated weren't pretty, but should hold fine long term. Later joints looked just like I used to make them, but I was definitely not nearly as efficient as I used to be. I ended up using PEX to complete the drain connection. The other end was more difficult. I was originally going to try to desweat the cap in the laundry room, but there was just too much plastic to do so safely even with a heat shield. Tried using a mini hacksaw, but there was too much twist, so ended up blocking the stub to the best as I can and used a sawzall to cut through the cap. Once the air was purged from the drain line, the flow looked good with no splatter.
I guess those pipes were copper and covered with paint originally.
For cutting copper, the Ridgid 101 Tubing Cutter worked nicely for me . It is small but cuts easily in a tight space.